I have completed a first draft of my music video then have asked for feedback on it. These are all the shots used in my music video.
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Shot 1 - Have 3 clones of "Randolph" sitting against a cargo box. 0:00 - 0:10
Shot 2 - "Randolph" saying the first few words directly down the camera. 0:10 - 0:17
Shot 3 - "Randolph" walking towards the camera. 0:17 - 0:21
Shot 4 - Randolph saying "Looking for the fame" 0:21 - 0:23
Shot 5 - Black and white shot circling "Randolph" 0:23 - 0:27
Shot 6 - Randolph saying "I said I'm looking for the fame" 0:27 - 0:29
Shot 2 - "Randolph" saying the first few words directly down the camera. 0:10 - 0:17
Shot 3 - "Randolph" walking towards the camera. 0:17 - 0:21
Shot 4 - Randolph saying "Looking for the fame" 0:21 - 0:23
Shot 5 - Black and white shot circling "Randolph" 0:23 - 0:27
Shot 6 - Randolph saying "I said I'm looking for the fame" 0:27 - 0:29
Shot 7 - Reversing shot 3, so he walks away from the camera. 0:29 - 0:32
Shot 8 - Close of Randolph against the wall. 0:32 - 0:46
Shot 9 - Slow motion of Randolph knocking sweets out of someones hands. 0:46 - 0:51
Shot 10 - Time lapse of the night sky - 0:51 - 0:53
Shot 11 - Randolph walking away, filming his feet. 0:53 - 0:56
Shot 12 - Randolph singing to camera (medium shot) 0:56 - 1:09
Shot 13 - Randolph singing to camera (close up) 1:09 - 1:20
Shot 14 - Randolph against the wall singing 1:20 - 1:43
Shot 15 - Randolph singing with the red background 1:43 - 1:54
Shot 16 - Randolph sat on the green cargo box 1:54 - 2:06
Shot 17 - Black and White Randolph slowly looking up. 2:06 - 2:12
Shot 18 - Randolph sat on green cargo box (different position) 2:12 - 2:14
Shot 19 - Black and White close up of Randolph singing 2:14 - 2:18
Shot 20 - Randolph sat on green box (in another different position) 2:18 - 2:28
Shot 21 - Randolph walking away 2:28 - 2:30
Shot 22 - Randolph singing against the wall 2:30 - 2:47
Shot 23 - Mirror shot 2:47 - 2:53
Shot 24 - Leaves falling from the sky 2:53 - 3:01
Shot 25 - Mirror shot again 3:01 - 3:11
Shot 26 - Slow motion walk across the wall 3:11 - 3:16
Shot 37 - Paint across the screen 3:16 - 3:21.
The feedback I received was to change shots 4,5 and 6 and replace it with something else, I also have been told that there is a lot of shots of Randolph singing, so therefore I should have more shots of him doing something else. Shot 12 and 13 were too long, so I need to film something to go over the top of that as well. The lip syncing does need to be fixed, however most of that is due to the uploading. Shot 16, should have more variety of positions of Randolph sat on the cargo box. The mirror shot from shot 23 doesn't necessarily suit the urban feel that I was aiming for, so I need to change the scenery to something such as a car window instead.
Shot 8 - Close of Randolph against the wall. 0:32 - 0:46
Shot 9 - Slow motion of Randolph knocking sweets out of someones hands. 0:46 - 0:51
Shot 10 - Time lapse of the night sky - 0:51 - 0:53
Shot 11 - Randolph walking away, filming his feet. 0:53 - 0:56
Shot 12 - Randolph singing to camera (medium shot) 0:56 - 1:09
Shot 13 - Randolph singing to camera (close up) 1:09 - 1:20
Shot 14 - Randolph against the wall singing 1:20 - 1:43
Shot 15 - Randolph singing with the red background 1:43 - 1:54
Shot 16 - Randolph sat on the green cargo box 1:54 - 2:06
Shot 17 - Black and White Randolph slowly looking up. 2:06 - 2:12
Shot 18 - Randolph sat on green cargo box (different position) 2:12 - 2:14
Shot 19 - Black and White close up of Randolph singing 2:14 - 2:18
Shot 20 - Randolph sat on green box (in another different position) 2:18 - 2:28
Shot 21 - Randolph walking away 2:28 - 2:30
Shot 22 - Randolph singing against the wall 2:30 - 2:47
Shot 23 - Mirror shot 2:47 - 2:53
Shot 24 - Leaves falling from the sky 2:53 - 3:01
Shot 25 - Mirror shot again 3:01 - 3:11
Shot 26 - Slow motion walk across the wall 3:11 - 3:16
Shot 37 - Paint across the screen 3:16 - 3:21.
The feedback I received was to change shots 4,5 and 6 and replace it with something else, I also have been told that there is a lot of shots of Randolph singing, so therefore I should have more shots of him doing something else. Shot 12 and 13 were too long, so I need to film something to go over the top of that as well. The lip syncing does need to be fixed, however most of that is due to the uploading. Shot 16, should have more variety of positions of Randolph sat on the cargo box. The mirror shot from shot 23 doesn't necessarily suit the urban feel that I was aiming for, so I need to change the scenery to something such as a car window instead.














